A Few Seconds in Starbucks
We were in a Starbucks near my place. It was around 9 to 10pm. It was drizzling outside. The café was slightly crowded -I saw some dudes hanging out while surfing the internet, a threesome of people discussing their business matter, and some other couples catching up some coffee.
The air in the cafe was cheerful with the existence of hyperactive baristas. On top of that, there were two cute barista dudes at the counter, which made the counter view… pleasant. I could smell the aroma of coffee stirred with smells of vanilla and chocolate sporadically. The smell was so pleasant that I can taste the coffee in my mouth.
I wore a black shirt and a white sweater while he was wearing a red sweater and both of us were wearing jeans. Casual. We sat at a small table, slightly in the middle of the café. On the table, sat a Grande Mocha Frappucino topped with whip cream. A Frappucino, as always, despite the chilliness.
He looked at me in the eyes. He grabbed my hands and held them so tightly as if it was his. As if he didn’t want to let me go. He gently brushed my hands with his while looking at me. He meant every stroke of his brush. He drew his mouth so closely to my hands, breathed in, closed his eyes and kissed the back of my right hand. I was truly overwhelmed.
I blushed, and we smiled.
p.s, I just feel like writing something different this time. This may, or may NOT be a fragment of a true story of my life. Let me have a satisfaction in an odd way, alright?
p.p.s, I MIGHT tell you what this is in my next post.
p.p.p.s, Yesterday, Azima, Raffy, Usop and I played ice skating and watched Hancock. We had a great time. Thanks guys.
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Aisyah in love?
macam karangan cerpen.
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in love? hahaha. not at all. not at the moment.
Like I said, I just felt like writing something different.
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aisyah.. is this a dream or what? hahaha.. “Love is in the AIR”.. (should i make one montage like Macbook AIR does?)
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good luck, aisyah!
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dream? uh.. not really.
good luck apanya? hahah.
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hey, nice writing!
Fiction or not, those few paragraphs really drew me in.
It’s interesting that ‘you’ managed to check out the guys while ‘he’ is sitting there. Just because you’re in love doesn’t mean you can’t ‘cuci mata’ eh?
You have aptly written the lovey mode that you are in (IMO). No exaggeration that more often than not made me want to kill myself.
audi’s last blog post..the waste
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maybe he was late and thats why the girl was stalking the 2 cute baristas at the counter while waiting for the guy. hahah.
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hancock is truly awesome, kan?
“I” just blushed? hey…come on, do something sparkling.
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takkan nak nangis kot. nangis terharu. hahahaha.
blushing is simple. (mls nak fikir. haha)
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betul ke ni?mcm real je.like your writing.lain sikit dari biase.:)
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macam je.
hehe. thanks.
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Is this real?
“Mom..!! Kensel rombongan merisik Aisyah..!!”
Huwaa..
Rizwan’s last blog post..He? She? Whatever..
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Wow. That was sweet. Love the way you narrated it. :)
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aisyah in love..
[tetiba]
come on…
best ape kapel..
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saya sokong [even saya suka single je]
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single rock apa.
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me, in love? hahaha. hey, ika. you know better kan? aduh.
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i know better? hehe
ika’s last blog post..7 itu nombor keluarga saya
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kiss kiss kiss.. cait! bau kari! gi basuh tgn.
(it happened you know)
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to you? woah.
*sniffs my hands*
oh. bau bangun tdo. hahaha.
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kalau jenis tido seluk tangan dalam suar..yerk!!(actually it happens)
uzair’s last blog post..Aku Masih Hidup
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nice writing..ingat bebetul tadi..kalau bebetul pun xper..
uzair’s last blog post..Aku Masih Hidup
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aww. that’s so sweet.
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Ooh! That was really sweet. Reading this blog makes me want to meet the guy. Haha. I need someone like that in my life. =P
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wow! i feel like reading a love stroy novel. wahahah… maybe i should write a love story novel sis. you have talent on it.
ps: i miss starbucks so much. in here (ramunia<—gila ceruk) starbuck and other type of kopitiam, doesn’t exist. this place sucks for urban people like me. wohohohoho
pss: “He gently brushed my hands with his while looking at me. He meant every stroke of his brush. He drew his mouth so closely to my hands, breathed in, closed his eyes and kissed the back of my right hand.” <— this sentence makes me ‘meremang bulu tengkok siot’ :))
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Same here! I thought I was reading a beautifully written novel :D I’m starting to wonder whether the ‘he’ you’re talking about is some cute baristas… hmmm *scratches head*
Anyway, this sounds a little inappropriate and very amusing :))
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yeah. threesome. LOL. it bugs me. but, oh well. :)
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Women and their romance novels. :P
Anyway, you love sick or something is it. I’m pretty sure you’ve got something better to tell us…like your iMac, woman!
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I just did. -__-”
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*off topic: Oops sorry about my recent post Aisyah. I’ll promise I’ll post in English.
Something different? I pretty much thought it was close to reality. Hehe. To be honest, this post sounds like a part of a romance novel, which is awesome. :D
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Hehe, I like this kind of writing from you! =)
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Aisyah sedang menjiwangkan diri… Biasalah zaman remaja,…. This is your time….
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zool. jgn. geli. hahah
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my ex boyfriend used to say that my hands kasar. kasar macam lelaki. sometimes he refuse to hold it.
sedih jugak. marah pun ada. but anyway, saya tak bagi terus. kalau kasar, tak yah pegang langsung.
you’re lucky. siap dapat kiss.
AyUmi’s last blog post..:: will be back ::
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hahahha. tgn I kasar jugak. serious. he [my ex] never really admit that. he didnt say it was soft either. so, i guess, he didn’t care.
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ko tak lempang jer your bf for saying that? :D
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hmm siann u d0k sne sorg2:(
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it is beautifully written, you have talent! :D
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